In the cold afternoon in December. It’s very cold, and Pete and Nicky look for shelter in a B&B. Annie is the owner. She has got some dogs because she is single.
At midnight Nicky hears a noise. A man it’s in the house. Nicky see a book on the floor.
The next day tree mans go to house and says to Annie they want to buy the house.
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Hello girls! Here are some changes I would like you to make:
1) Start as: It is a .... (not 'In').
2)'A man it's in the house' is not correct. It should be: A man is in...
3)Nicky sees (with a final 's'!!!)
4) The plural of 'man' is 'men'
5) ... an say to Annie...(not 'says'. Remember the subject is plural: men)
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